Fog Warning

yetrameter sonnet

Fog warning.

 

The motor way shrouded in mist

An air of surreality

As if the world did not exist.

Cocooned inside a fantasy.

Some crazy drivers still insist

 on driving as if they could see.

The toad ahead without the mist

Oblivious to reality

Until the day their luck runs out

As it must eventually

That‘s when they learn beyond all doubt

That driving fast when you can’t see

Is bound to end in tragedy,

 

Monday, 14 November 2011

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Reviews

[Muse]

This makes me think about all the times....that my life has flashed before my eyes..... all because someone thinks they are invincible. The title is catchy and appropriate; this helps pull the reader in. Nice penning.

[Greg the Bard]

Sounds like something I have been in myself. Great flow and rhyme. I like this a lot. Great write.

[Hoosier Belle]

There is crazy every where in this world. Wonderful write.

[Donald Meikle]

Sonnetier magnifique on any subject. You play freely sir and are a joy to read.