Go with my blessing.2010

rhyming quatrains

Go with my blessing 2010

 

The  Jesus freaks are out in force.

Because it’s Sunday morn of course.

They are convinced that they are right

I find it hard to be polite.

 

Although I can respect their views.

They do not have the right to choose

To ring my bell and pester me.

I keep my Sunday mornings free.

 

To do the things I want to do.

I do not want to listen to

 their view of Christianity.

Because it makes no sense to me.

 

They do not seem to understand

that they must leave when I demand.

I like to keep my property

free from religious bigotry..

 

Friday, 17 December 2010

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Reviews

[InkSlinger]

To have god in your heart is more important than to dance and sing in a charade like a hypocrite.. Peace be with you, this holiday season..

[Charles]

Well done - good message. Why the absence of capitals in only 3 lines and why the double period at the end?

[Poeticpiers]

I do not feel any need to belong to any organised religion I believe in God butprefer to think for myself

[Cassandra D.]

this was pretty good.
I loved the rhyme play you put into this poem.
Well done :]

[Revolutionary]

I agree and blessed be you for saying so.I will copy this andhang it on my door

[sheila russ]

Great write, and I believe that 99% of them are hypocrites. Most of them don't pratice what they preach and I hate that.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

God is out there! Just look around and you can see! I choose to believe and I wish everyone would, but that's not about to happen! So I'll leave you to your belief! And not push, but pray!

[Frank F. Atanacio]

oh boy-- strong little rant :) but everyone should be respected so I agree

[KAREN]

Well I am a religious person, but I want push GOD off on you, but he is real! I only hope oneday everyone would believe, but that's wishful thinking I'm sure.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

seriously! i am so exhausted with talking about religion!
i say, if you are into religion and that works for you then thats fantastic FOR YOU! but keep it to yourself. don't shove it down other people's throats. as one of my best friends likes to say "to each, his own"
my religion is music, and thats it.lol