Go with my blessing.2010

rhyming quatrains

Go with my blessing 2010

 

The  Jesus freaks are out in force.

Because it’s Sunday morn of course.

They are convinced that they are right

I find it hard to be polite.

 

Although I can respect their views.

They do not have the right to choose

To ring my bell and pester me.

I keep my Sunday mornings free.

 

To do the things I want to do.

I do not want to listen to

 their view of Christianity.

Because it makes no sense to me.

 

They do not seem to understand

that they must leave when I demand.

I like to keep my property

free from religious bigotry..

 

Friday, 17 December 2010

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Reviews

[Desert Dreamer]

I enjoyed this poem...I don't like it when people come to my door advertizing their religion.

[Lady]

I feel the same way - It's annoying how they constantly pester and judge and damn you. Love this. The rhyming is clever and your words make me laugh.
Great work!

[Jaeda]

Haha, spectacular! It was enough that this made me smile. Oh Bible thumpers, come this way not.

[:)]

Dude I'm a christian right but you are sooo correct.
That's the sad part...

Good write and the rhyming just makes it that much more sarcastic haha... :)

[SM Davis]

You have really mastered the meter. As always I enjoyed this read very much!

[Rain Kissed Secret]

I've got to say, I smirked at your work. It's often times what I think when people like that come knocking at my door, but I give them a chance because I still don't understand even though they have explained this over and over. I will continue to let them in till the day it finally clicks. Then I can yell at them in their own words and tell them to stick it where the sun don't shine ^^

[Katie L]

great job!

[Lucia Morgan]

well... maybe you should read them this little poem next time. :)

[LadyNaida]

Well I don't share these views because I am a Christian, I am not religious, but I have a relationship with Jesus Christ. Not everyone that comes to your door has the right information, they are just trying to get you to except a religion rather than a relationship with Christ. I too have been visited by people who claim to know Jesus, but I share my faith with them and they respect that. I believe everyone has the right to believe in whatever it is they want to believe and I don't go on networks like this one blasting people like them. I rather be Jesus freak than a devil worshiper anytime. I praise God, he is my everything and I will continue to praise Him regardless of what people have to say.

[Fegger]

But...
Would you, could you, on a whim
Let me guide you 'way from sin?
Sundays aren't for sleeping late,
But for tooling keys for Heaven's gate.
If you permit me to come in,
I might earn my 'Prophet Pin';
And with that pin, I've heard it said,
That Sundays...I could stay in bed!
...and then, we could both sleep late--
Wouldn't that be...uhhhh, just great?

Sorry...you made me laugh; and I went on a Seussian tangent.