Circuit Judge?

a poem in rhyming quatrains

 

Circuit Judge?

 

I am detached,dispassionate.

My judgements purely logic based.

I think I can proudly state

 all chance of error is erased.

 

Emotions do not affect me.

My circuits are all solid state

Designed for functionality.

I do not love I cannot hate.

 

It is a pointless exercise

attempting to influence me

I disregard the lawyers lies

I rule them out immediately.

 

I consider all the evidence

As I was designed to do

 which points to guilt or innocence.

I can detect what isn’t true.

 

I have no human loyalties.

My logic circuits cannot fail

I judge the facts impartially

You can be sure truth will prevail.

 

I am detached impassionate

You may be very sure of that

My only role to serve the state

I am the perfect bureaucrat.

 

18/08/2009

http:// blog.myspace.com/poeticpiers

Reviews

[Snuggles McClintock]

this reminded of Gilliam's Brazil: clever, calculated wit and a dose of logic. Well done

[Tate Morgan]

Great But Man is if anything ruled by emotion and judged best with compassion
Great write

[fallen_sueanne]

I liked this a lot, good job :)

[The Wave]

this was good.
i liked that you chose to use a rhyming pattern here. it made it more fun to read.
but you seem so serious. lol

your a good writer though.
good job :)