Wiggle Giggle

silly sonnet

 

Wiggle giggle

 

Some women wiggle as they walk

 as a pretty woman should.

But others jiggle as they stalk.

It’s not a very pleasant view.

If you are looking from the rear

To see a fat posterior

 that’s larger than it ought to be

Still it’s something you often see

 A womans wiggle’s wonderful

 I think it’s really beautiful

 but then I am a connoisseur

 of Lady’s pretty derrieres

 A wise girl pays attention to

what she looks like from the rear view.

 

9-Jul-08

 

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Reviews

[Suelou]

Very cute.

[Lily1111]

I loved the light whimsical tone of this humorous little poem that had me chuckling as I read it. I adored the creative rhyme incorporated. I vow here and now to always "pay attention to what" I "look like from the rear view" so I wiggle and never jiggle. Thanks for the enjoyable reminder! LOL

[Ray Hamilton]

I don't wiggle when I walk
I certainly do not stalk
Then again a man I be
But my derriere is big too you see
Middle age spread has caught up with me
But then again slim and slender I have never been

I to enjoy the ladies walk
I try hard not to gawk
Then again a man I be
Everywhere these nice ladies I see
They come in all shapes and sizes
Then again so do we

I enjoyed your write as you can see
As a man talking about women and that part
The confusion and mixed feelings start

With a lovely lady I wish to be
Then no other will I wish to see
I must say that for if I find one to give me a try
I sure don't want a beating and a black eye LOL
Then again a man I be
Time will tell we will see

Thanks for the fun write I enjoyed, hope you don't mind
Ray { Not a Poet }

[Passion for Literature]

what a whimsical poem...cheery and amusing

"A wise girl pays attention to
what she looks like from the rear view."
...love those last 2 lines because you are right, my dear sir, one never knows when a derriere connoisseur may be prowling :o)

VERY WELL WRITTEN...I like your sense of humor

[WordMaster]

What a wonderfully whimsical poem, with a delightful tone

I giggled all the way through to the last line

Another marvelously written poem.. I 'm learning a great deal from reading your work

Thank you for sharing

[Suki]

Ha ha this made me laugh. : P