Either or for Friend Legion

sonnet in iambic pentameter variant rhyme pattern

 

 

Either Or

 

A thought has just occurred to me.

When someone claims a victory

then someone else suffers defeat.

 A simple thought that is complete.

You either win or else you lose,

there is no alternative to choose.

Acceptable when it’s game.

A fleeting bid for some small fame.

Transfer it to the battleground,

this simple thought becomes profound.

You win you live, you lose you die.

That is the harsh reality.

Until we find a better way

 then men on other men will prey.

 

7-Jul-08

 

 

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Reviews

[WordMaster]

This is true�

It won't stop until we all think it through...

A thought provoking write

Well done�

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This as always is a profound piece with thought provoking social conciseness. Can think of much a number of better ways can't you. The truth of it is in war no one wins, both sides loose too many lives. An enjoyable read, Well done.
Debby

[Jane Doe]

Very well said. I enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme of this poem immensely. This piece is full of wisdom, great writing!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Such words of wisdom in such a lovely format. Thank you for sharing this. Your works are always moving and compelling.
Light,
Siddartha