Morning always comes to soon for M lady Raven spirit

 

 

 

The morning always comes too soon.

 

The morning always comes too soon ,

when you are locked in loves embrace

You much prefer the gentle moon

 to the suns bright shining face.

Which brings an end to your delight

When you are locked in loves embrace.

You can’t compare the soft dark night

 to the suns bright shining face.

You can’t compare the soft dark night

with the birth of a new day.

Which brings an end to your delight

but can’t command the night to stay.

With the birth of a new day

 you have to rise reluctantly.

When you are locked in loves embrace.

The morning always comes too soon.

 

4-May-08

 

Pantoum

 

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Reviews

[Bonnie]

I like your poetry style. Good images and combination of nature with human activities, emotions and thoughts.

I want to read more of your poetry! I'm new and have recently begun to explore this community.

[Helena]

Oh well done poet! I love Pantoum form, have never tried
it myself, but after reading yours it makes we want to
pick up my pen and start.

This was good very good!