Self Determination

sonnet

 

 

 

Self determination.

 

I heard the bullets ricochet

 and prayed that none would come my way

We were deployed to keep the peace,

but sneak attacks will never cease.

Until the general populace

 decide that they will put in place

Their own laws which will guarantee

to everyone equality.

We can’t impose democracy

by force of arms. It’s clear to see.

The people have the right to choose

what they accept or they refuse.

What right have we to interfere

 It’s plain we are not wanted here.

 

2-May-08

 

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Reviews

[Lily1111]

A remarkable poem with a wonderful message. Again, I am spellbound by the creative rhymes. You make it look easy. A wonderful sonnet indeed.

[Jane Doe]

Well said! I completely agree with you, we never should have gone over there. This is a wonderful poem, thanks for sharing!

[An Ordinary Woman]

Self determination, indeed. This is quite powerful and both the situation and the poem demand attention.
It is I who applauds you. Excellent and powerful writing, Poeticipers