Pecadillo

Sonnet

 

 

 

Peccadillo.

 

My Guardian Angel is a prude

 she has a pious attitude.

I have a little devil too

 who tries to persuade me to do.

The naughty things which are more fun.

 But when all is said and done

it’s up to me I have free will.

And in the end I’ll foot the bill.

If I should choose to go astray

I know there’ll be a price to pay.

 But some sins are well worth the price

 a small foretaste of paradise.

 You know what I’m referring to.

I am quite certain that you do.

 

28-Apr-08

 http://blog.myspace.com/poeticpiers

Reviews

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This is very cute. I think perhaps the trick is to ensure that yur little angel become a bit devilish no? I like your way with words....simple, musical and to the point.

[Whiles]

haha

[Sarah]

Nice final lines. xD I looove sonnets. (: I liked how this one wasn't completely serious, it was a nice change. Great job!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

This made me laugh in the end - thank you - quite a lovely ode. You are exceptional at these. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha