Dollars and sense

poem

 

 

 

 

Dollars and Sense.

 

Financially the world’s a mess.

 The reason why not hard to guess.

 

A credit based economy

 will always lack stability.

Advancing cash too easily

 

 may rapidly increase your take

but in the end it’s a mistake.

 A nightmare from which you cannot wake,

leading to sorrow and heartache.

 

For people who have overspent

 money far too easily lent

 by bankers who had one intent.

 

To profit from your borrowing.

My final comment cash is king.

 

23-Apr-08

Reviews

[theair]

Ugh-- too closely do I know the realities of this poem. My only suggestion: put a colon after 'comment' in the last line.

stay debt-free
theair