Neater meter for M lady Kara

 

 

 

Neater meter?

 

I have to write a sonnet in free verse.

I must stick to Iambic pentameter.

A meter that I do not often use.

Pentameter is my more usual style.

A Sapphic meter would be so much worse.

I am more comfortable with the latter.

I find that some odd metres can confuse

 a simple rhymester like me for a while.

I’m quite convinced that pentameter

makes my presentations appear neater.

It may be that you think I am obtuse

and that my simple verses make you smile.

You are entitled to your point of view.

 Naturally I won’t agree with you!

 

11-Apr-08

 

 

Free verse sonnet

Reviews

[Kara Emily Krantz]

"It may be that you think I am obtuse
and that my simple verses make you smile."

well i'm not going to lie - that much is TOTALLY true :)

big hugs

[Kara Emily Krantz]

is there a reason you have my name on this title?? i swear to god it wasn't there like 5 minutes ago lolol cuz i read this and then came back to it... unless i'm just going crazy.... (totally possible)

this is too cute. dont know if it will win you any awards for it's literary merit... but... A for effort :)