Dusk to Dawn for M'Lady Pammie

 

Dusk til Dawn

 

 

The evening breeze a lullaby

 which echoes softly in the sky

 and bids the sun go to his rest.

The silver moon will take his place

dispensing silver light with grace.

When night has passed the sun will rise

 and from the east will paint the skies

 with pastel tints we love the best.

From palest pink to rose and gold.

 A miracle that men behold

 with wondering eyes,when they arise

 to start the duties of the day.

from their warm beds reluctantly.

Each morning brings a fresh surprise

 the sun provides triumphantly.

 

9-Apr-08

 

 

 

Rosarian Sonnet

Reviews

[Annalisa]

This was a pleasant read. The coloured font bothered me though, the poem is idyllic and the red is simple to harsh. It clashes with the poem and I found it to be very distracting. Other than that there was one line that was a little awkward at a first glance, "with pastel tints we love the best", after reading it twice it smoothed out but it stopped the progression of the poem.

This was a nice poem, good work.