But I don't want to

Triverse poem

 

 

 

 

 

But I don’t want to.

 

I wander freely mentally.

Enraptured by the things I see

within my worlds of fantasy.

 

I just reject reality

 where nothing ever works for me.

Quite certain I would rather be

 

divorced from harsh reality

There is no comfort here for me

 and live in my own fantasy.

 

A dream which cannot possibly

 be realised apparently

Reluctantly I must agree.

 

That I am where I’m meant to be.

You can’t escape reality

and learn to act responsibly.

 

30-Mar-08

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Yet another excellent poem and I agree with it. Fantasy is a lot better than reality. And yet, reality always creeps back in even though can make our own reality out of fantasy for awhile . I love the rhymne in this poem. It reads really well. Really good poem. It's like magic too.

Tina

[Damien Dsoul]

Damn! I wish I could go to that same place where you are: just feeling myself geting lost in my dreams, and not giving a thought about my landlord who're opresently banging at my door demanding for last month's rent money. Oh, how I wish ...

[Emily B]

but I don't want to . . .

Some days, I don't. Charming poem. The title drew me in.