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A Poem by Poeticpiers
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Rensaku

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the sky a black slate
 which is not yet written on
lightning adds the script.
 
in electric blue
although you may not understand
You feel you ought to.
 
but can’t interpret,
 the fiery script beyond
your limited skill.
 
you are not meant to.
 the message is not for you.
the earth understands.
 
the words easily
accepts heavens benison
 an answered prayer.
 
she quenches her thirst
while we gaze in frustrated
curiosity
 
15-Mar-08
 
 

© 2008 Poeticpiers


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I see clouds shifting and changing the view that others cannot see until the change thir stance to stand beside me, yet they will never see or understand what I see, but is it what you see? The universe alone understands ... nice work for interpretation!!
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Poeticpiers
Poeticpiers

Near Durham city UK, United Kingdom



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72years, young married. Ex police officer Ex social worker. interests Reading and writing poetry Painting and drawing in coloured pencil avid reader,sci fi fantasy crime. comparitive religion and esp... more..

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