Poemtree

Narrative verse

 

 

 

Poemtree..

 

A mighty oak tree offers shade

to all who choose to rest, freely.

It’s far from any forest glade.

 Standing alone in majesty.

 

Travellers who have rested her

 have fastened to this mighty tree.

 A notice board on which appear

examples of their poetry.

 

Some were written hastily

others prepared in advance

Some laminated properly

which can be read at first glance.

 

Weather worn ,unreadable

 the early ones which set the pace

although they are illegible

 are still left carefully in place.

 

This is no place for graffiti

 but poems written to express

 their gratitude towards the tree.

A record of their thankfulness

 

Who built the board? Nobody knows

 nor does it matter seemingly.

 Mean while this fine selection grows.

The oak is now a poemtree.

 

2-Mar-08

Reviews

[Kathleen Marie]

I love the idea of this poem, so unique and so true for so many. Thanks for an interesting read.

[Maxwell]

I like the concept of this very much, highly imaginative. I'm curious, however, as to the reasons behind your period-placement. One line as an example: "have fastened to this mighty tree./ A notice board on which appear" -- this makes a lot more sense without the period.

In the second stanza, do you mean "here" instead of "her"?

Anyway, your sense is rhyme and rhythm is very good. I'd like to see this a little more "colorful", more imagery. And, well, try and deal with those oddly-placed periods, haha.

Great start for a well-imagined concept. Thanks for posting this.

[Brenda Sue]

I love this, very unique. The story is wonderful. Beautifully penned. Great job.