Letter

i wrote you a letter to give,
but last night,I lost it in those sheets,
it's about how we take and give,
i'll find it, drop it at your feet

don't cry when you read
the cursive and the sorrow
cause your strength I need
so we can make tomorow

Reviews

[Water_the_Sun]

:) I like this piece a lot

Its simplistic and short, but it says a lot.

The speaker is very... nonchalnte(forgive my spelling) in a way, but there is more meaning behind the words than he/she would let on. Like trying to act whole when inside youre shattered, or trying not to break a sweat when your load is to heavy to carry.

It also says a lot as far as the importance of the physical. Like....

What i get from this is a kind of casual love gone awry, as in, one person is putting in more than the other and this is a confession of that, a statement, a revelation from one to the other and a plea for change.

Its a very interesting piece and can be interpreted several other ways as well.

Kudos, very good write. Great, even:)

[Simone]

Nicely written and well put together. I can almost see a letter with cursive wriiting down the page and great job with emotions. Keep it up.