Tremble

Tremble

A Poem by poetic minds

why do I fall and tremble
to the beat of all this
to just one single kiss

I'm just holding you tight
and your tugging at my heart
your my joy, love at it's hight
I am offering my heart

say what you want to say
you are always beautiful to me
how you stair is the way
you fill this world and I believe

you demand with your smile
what I would give with no regret
leave the sky with no denile
I love you, so please just there sit

the sun is in your eyes
your heart fills up skies
you're making loves heart die

to powerfull for this
I tremble to just this
then offer you my kiss

© 2009 poetic minds


Author's Note

poetic minds
By now you will have realized there are many little or huge errors. These are all prototypes so far. I may work on them later if I can make time.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

126 Views
Added on December 16, 2009

Author

poetic minds
poetic minds

unknown



About
Hello, My Name is Wesley. I have been writing since I was about 13. Started off writing crap, but its improved a bit since then. I never have taken any classes to improve my work. So if you have any h.. more..

Writing