Piece Of Heaven

For a woman I once knew...

 Piece of heaven

Let me message your feet until you forget they  were

meant for walking...

Your shoulders, back, and waist  until you feel as

though you've left the body.

Beneath the purest form of relaxation this is your

day,

I'll sit beside the tub while you soak and read a

story.

Watch as your eyes get heavy I am filled with joy

because my favorite past time is admiring you while

asleep,

 I nominate It for the world's eighth wonder the

melody I hear made by the stars  that twinkle when you

breathe,

your skin is so radiant the moon says to the night sky

what about me?

I just wish I was there when God said let there be

light and it was...

Let there be a startling gorgeous

creature without peer and here you are.

My piece of heaven. 

© 2006 Marvin Lewis Jr.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[J.Black]

Kinda speechless.... knocked me off my feet, but I'll stand back up and preach now what I felt.
Whom ever this woman may be, she seems like such a Goddess to you, it's nearly heart warming because you would do anything to slave to her needs and wants. - Mmmm what a true man he is!

"I just wish I was there when God said let there be
light and it was...
Let there be a startling gorgeous
creature without peer and here you are.
My piece of heaven. "

Those lines stood out the most to me. It's nice when you feel so close to someone, that they simply are your angel and you would kill yourself just so you can be where she is, in this heaven she creates for you. This is so romantic, my god you have a sensational way with your words if I must admit. This is what ever woman would wish for in a man, and I bet you'll make the dream husband when the time comes my friend.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Ahah! this is so lovely, so warm and just beautiful praise. A excellent write, and a talent for creating sweet words together.

[T]

Beautiful poem! All of it was great but I love the ending.

"I just wish I was there when God said let there be

light and it was...

Let there be a startling gorgeous

creature without peer and here you are.

My piece of heaven. "

Great lines. Good job!

[Dalaina Renee]

Beautiful poem! Loved this!

[Taja B.]

This is so beautifully penned and heartfelt. The emotion is very abundant in this poem, and this has really touched me while reading this.

Your significant other is very lucky! :]

Thanks for sharing.

[Spat Queen]

I can't believe so many ladies fell for that one!! just kidding. Your woman is very lucky.

[Unique Encouragement]

Loved it. That sent chills throughout my body. Keep up the good work!

[imm's place]

powerful celestial passionate romnace . the emotions flow with every word, a masterpiece, mary

[Donald Meikle]

I am satisfied that we have taken the time to watch sunsets like that. A full body massage should always start at the feet (mine do), and this work should have earned you breakfast at least.

[darkgurl]

This is a wonderful and moving piece like this felt this, it's heartwarming as well.