My Imagination

Taking it back once again... The third poem I ever wrote.

 

My Imagination

I want to ride a cloud over my obscure existence,

fall asleep in a crescent moon while whispering my dreams 

knowing that God is listening.

And there I’ll invest a lifetime and since words are life I’ll procreate with one rhyme.

I will create without consequence, 

in God time is no longer prevalent so as a child eternity is spent.

I’ll spend the night on His doorstep just for inspiration,

write altogether different because His fingertips are upon my imagination.

If I had wings I would fly to a place where hard times could be explained, bad memories erased, so I could dream again...

Put piece of mind in a frame and feel free again be called by an altogether different name.

It is there I can be who I am forgetting what I never was,

take hold of reality with the hand of faith and write with the pen of God’s love… In my imagination.

Reviews

[Lyrical Love]

CHILLS, AND SPRINKLES OF GOLD DUST THAT CARRY LITTLE CYMBALS THAT PLAY A melody OF SERENITY (IN MY MIND, BODY, AND SPIRIT) THAT LEAVE ME STILLED...
trying to put into words what my soul feels in the vast comfort of your GREAT imagery, and GOD's eye view of the
relationship that you have in loving HIM (and what he demands of us..to LOVE!).
***I'll spend the night on His doorstep just for inspiration,
write altogether different because His fingertips are upon my imagination.*** MARVIN, WHAT A THOUGHT TO PONDER!! I try to stay in that realm, and not become enticed by the world-I can go to your poetry/writings and feel the peace in being there...Thank you!!
...and BRAVO!!

[Rain]

"It is there I can be who I am forgetting what I never was."
Read this line three times, each time it became deeper...such a good young poet...such a good heart. Rain..

[THE LOST ROSE]

Hey Brother this is another great one. Lyrical told me that you have over 600 hundred poems! So far I am enjoying everyone of them. I am so sorry it took my so long to read & review this one. I've been missing out. The Book The Book The Book! looking forward to it.

[BEEGE]

NICE!
Seriously, this is like Whoa!
"...since words are life I'll procreate with one rhyme." was a tight line.
What more can I say...
This was the ish pimp.

[distefano 401]

beautiful piece. i thoroughly enjoyed reading it and am glad you posted it. it made me open up my own imagination.

[Dani California]

I am completely inspired by your work..

"I'll spend the night on His doorstep just for inspiration,
write altogether different because His fingertips are upon my imagination."

Another outstanding write. And this is the third poem you've ever written.. ?
Wow.. your talent shines bright!

Excellent work.. :)

[Gunmetal Sky]

This is really nice...so much faith is shown through your words. You write positive things. That can be hard for some to do! I like this one.

[Dalaina Renee]

All I can say is wow! So cool! I really can't waite to go to heaven someday. Great poem!

[imm's place]

with such knowledge and desire anything is possible in dreams and writing. elegantly expressed, mary

[darkgurl]

"take hold of reality with the hand of faith and write with the pen of God's love� In my imagination." These lines here are just wonderful. Lovely write here can feel the emotion in this. You are a gifted writer, you show talent in yoru words....Kim