A Lover's Fruit Explosion

Raspberry pleasures

Taste of strawberry

Delight

Igniting the

Mango morning

To java veracity

 

Jumping into

A passion fruit

Afternoon

Of an orange creamcicle

Affair

 

Gliding upon

The pomegranate

Of blueberry appeal

Gently fading

Into blackberry sensations

Of organic explosions

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

such is the high degree of pleasure or enjoyment; joy as a rapid increase
in volume and release of energy in an extreme manner to taste the subtlety.
That of simple pleasures; a lover to indulge, I love the way you take into
posssession, form color and vibrance of a soft sweetness, talented work ^_^

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

I love it! Love and nature and food-what could be better?

[Poetic Beauty]

A poem.with dual appeal

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Indeed :) Excellent write my friend

[Poetic Beauty]

Thanks on page seven you will love dreamscapes and reality I'd you enjoyed this one

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Ok I'll read it

[Colleen a Bean]

lol this made me crave some delicious juicy fruit haha but that's probably not what u wanted to hear haha

[Poetic Beauty]

Actually I was thinking about fruit when I wrote this

[Colleen a Bean]

lol oh ok

[Poetic Beauty]

I wanted it to have a sensual feel as well a mixture of both

[Colleen a Bean]

well u did great

[Jibey]

Fruit is so deliciously sensual and conjures up all the delights of love-making... and your words go some way too... orgasmic explosion, maybe

[LadyCardiac]

I know this is going to sound so wrong but i want an orange creamcicle now lmao. I love the word play. But of course, you are an amazing poet.

[Veronica Chandler]

A tastefully blended, and lighthearted piece which excites my tastebuds. What a joy to read.

[Mauricio Montoya]

sweet delite!

[Dream Weaver]

This is a delectable write Kristina...nicely done!
I'm getting a little famished now :)~

[Dark Poetry]

This poem definitely gives out a colorful, delicious and friendly ambiance.

[Tina Kline]

Oh, how tasty and yummy on so many levels. A very refreshing and tasty treat, one to be longed for!! This so amazing!

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Sounds like a delicious smoothie. Hahaha. A fresh, fun poem!