Jubilant Stars

Infusion of emotions

Wield together

In an agitation

Of curious confusion

 

Blithe revelation

Resonates

Soaring to

Cosmic heights

 

Dancing with vigor

Revealing hidden

Melodies

That are but

A wisp upon

The jubilant stars

 

Dilation of love

Breathes soft

Serenities sigh

As the Milkway

Expands

 

Cultivation of poetic

Pleasures

Grows veining out

Across the distance

Distorting time

 

Lavender moments

Of chocolate

Dreams

As one name

Is painted

Across marshmallow

Moonbeams.

Reviews

[Jibey]

A lot of action and soraing emotion here... echoes, half-rhymes, rhymes and alliteration... it flows and sparkles like a brook in the sunshine and seems like a celebration of the joys of love... Love the thought of marshmallow moonbeams... soft and yielding, sweet and sensual

[Poetic Beauty]

I like to write with abstract ideas and make them relate to real life.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I just love your style and the sky at night imagery...comic pleasures with desert....

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

In the eyes of the innocent the beauty of the world seems endless... if only to be able togo back for just one day and feel it again.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching piece that slates the imagery and graded in well done, good read.

[Rusty]

Nice blend of succulent innuendo and visual visceral cues.

[Tina Kline]

This is an extraordinary and beautiful explosion of color, motion and imagery of the beauty of the cosmos delivered by the stars. I love this!

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

I love how you twisted two themes--stars and sweets--into one beautifully crafted confection. Great job.

[Layla J Omorose]

This is a poem with great imagery. "Lavender moments of chocolate" favorite line of thr poem. very beautifuly written

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

magical............so lovely!

[Wondering Mind]

a magical journey this take me to....beautiful expression.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice vision create by your good words. I like the flow of thoughts and the good description.
"Cultivation of poetic
Pleasures
Grows veining out
Across the distance
Distorting time"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote