Jubilant Stars

Infusion of emotions

Wield together

In an agitation

Of curious confusion

 

Blithe revelation

Resonates

Soaring to

Cosmic heights

 

Dancing with vigor

Revealing hidden

Melodies

That are but

A wisp upon

The jubilant stars

 

Dilation of love

Breathes soft

Serenities sigh

As the Milkway

Expands

 

Cultivation of poetic

Pleasures

Grows veining out

Across the distance

Distorting time

 

Lavender moments

Of chocolate

Dreams

As one name

Is painted

Across marshmallow

Moonbeams.

Reviews

[Jibey]

A lot of action and soraing emotion here... echoes, half-rhymes, rhymes and alliteration... it flows and sparkles like a brook in the sunshine and seems like a celebration of the joys of love... Love the thought of marshmallow moonbeams... soft and yielding, sweet and sensual

[Poetic Beauty]

I like to write with abstract ideas and make them relate to real life.

[Enigma]

Beautifully penned.

[Poetic Beauty]

thank you. I am glad you enjoyed this read.

[David Kwaku]

oh wow, i love this poem. The flow and imagery are just wonderful. Great use of words through out

[Jack Isaac]

I would have got hungry toward the end of this poem, but I just got back from a campfire featuring roasted marshmallows (really burnt on the outside... mmmm :)). So, I was able to collect my inner visions as I read this. Is it just me, or is something brilliantly sensual happening in this write? In any event, the universe is alive and happening, and is jubilant, as you so cleverly pointed out -- sure, time flies as the universe is having fun! I'd dare say, reading this was even better than eating roasted marshmallows --or, this was a great way to top off the day. Thanks :)

[LadyCardiac]

marshmallow moon beams.... definitely allows the mind to esxape... nice.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Perfect pleasure to read! The imagery is so right on!

[KAREN]

Nicely penned, love the last stanza.

[blueseeker]

one of my favorite genres of poetry.
the structure and imagery of your poem is well crafted. reading it for the second time, it really bolded the magic behind it.

[Veronica Chandler]

Dreamy, wispy and full of wonder. This is a delightful piece.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Space has always been one of my fascination, nice work.