Glassy Spirit

Angular chaos weaves

Intricate designs

Surrounding the premise

Of the heart’s desire

 

A glassy spirit waives

All intimate connections

With the outside world

That spins with discord

 

Assertive reaction

Against the gambit of love

As the mind drifts internally

To memories perfectly preserved

 

Reviews

This made me think of Mother Nature for some reason. I love how you used a beautiful choice of words in this poem! It's truly amazing, so thank you a bunch for sharing this with me!

[Wondering Mind]

I wonder if the mind and spirit do reach that point of collaboration, I've read and heard so, but it does need a very high-state of being....Brings to mind the "middle way" of Buddha and enlightenment.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ah the structure so near and dear to my own heart, a perfect piece.

[SUGATA M]

Poetic justice by Poetic beauty

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

the mind seems to always drift there........profound Poetic Beauty.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You must have peripheral vision if you are gonna see the whole truth... a mind stimulating poem, nice to see something new from you.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

This poem painted an interesting picture in my mind...very good!