Glassy Spirit

Angular chaos weaves

Intricate designs

Surrounding the premise

Of the heart’s desire

 

A glassy spirit waives

All intimate connections

With the outside world

That spins with discord

 

Assertive reaction

Against the gambit of love

As the mind drifts internally

To memories perfectly preserved

 

Reviews

[Ian Faraway]

Three simple stanzas yet a novel worth of meaning is how I would put this poem. This was very well done and the imagery was next to perfect. J'adore! -Ian

[Poetic Beauty]

It can be difficult to get and idea and feeling across in only a few words but I am glad I achieved this with this writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Great use of words. Made my old mind think and work. I like the way you made the life have strength and purpose. No weakness in the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Ruth]

Beautifully delivered hon! Always a pleasure to read your work, such intense emotion behind every piece, wow! xoxo

[fireblossom]

I like this poem. A fun ride.

[KAREN]

Nicely crafted! Awesome imagery!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Great combination of words that bring this piece together.

[Enigma]

Beautifully penned. Remarkable use of imagery. :)

[LonelySoul]

a bit of a twist on Alice n the looking glass,but from the mirrors point of view,while in a dream state...nice work here,imagination abounds

[Tina Kline]

Very beautiful, the words weave sort of a magic spell. Excellent poem.

[Octob3r Star]

Wonderful piece on preservation. Gives the reader a million ways to take it. Cheers!