Merging Worlds

Merging Worlds

Clasp my hand

Stroll with me

But for a moment

See the intent

At heart

 

See what lingers

Beneath the surface

As interest washes

Deep inside

 

Feel the spark

Of life begin

To ignite

View my world

From inside my

Mind

Walk beside me

Not forward

Or behind

 

Hear the whispers

Of soft soothing

Words

Feel the sizzling

Passion

Begin to emerge

 

Let the delicate

Touch

Caress the reluctant

Soul

 

Let me feel you

As emotions

Blossom and grow

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Walk beside me
Not forward
Or behind"
Love is two people with concern for each other happiness. When you love someone. Their joy and smile is the spark needed for you to be content. No weakness in this amazing poem of love.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

So divine and romantic... when the worlds of two souls collide it is a boom that brings beauty.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

beautiful....flowing,liked it much..great job dear.

[Octob3r Star]

That was a very good piece.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Very nice! I liked the expressions. Great poem.

[Lily Mae]

I love it.. stroll with me...that just drew me in. It was like a quiet journey into passions blaze.. still bold yet with a romantic grace..xo

[The Analog Kid]

Captivating. I like this style of layout and line spacing a lot and have been favoring it myself lately