Merging Worlds

Merging Worlds

Clasp my hand

Stroll with me

But for a moment

See the intent

At heart

 

See what lingers

Beneath the surface

As interest washes

Deep inside

 

Feel the spark

Of life begin

To ignite

View my world

From inside my

Mind

Walk beside me

Not forward

Or behind

 

Hear the whispers

Of soft soothing

Words

Feel the sizzling

Passion

Begin to emerge

 

Let the delicate

Touch

Caress the reluctant

Soul

 

Let me feel you

As emotions

Blossom and grow

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Walk beside me
Not forward
Or behind"
Love is two people with concern for each other happiness. When you love someone. Their joy and smile is the spark needed for you to be content. No weakness in this amazing poem of love.
Coyote

[Ian Faraway]

Oh this was just beautiful. The longing for another soul to intertwine with yours with the same intent to love and be equals. OH love, thy shy mistress, why do you tease me so. J'adore, as usual Poetic Beauty! -Ian

[Poetic Beauty]

I wrote this one a little while ago. It has been awhile since I have read it. Aww yes we all have those moments where we long to connect to another soul.

[SUGATA M]

nice conglomeration of feelings

[Jibey]

This poem has charm and soft romantic gentleness about it... seductive in its appeal

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

but for the moment see the intent at heart..........beautiful verse.....

I love how romantic this poem is.
Especially like the lines:
"Let the delicate touch caress the reluctant soul,
Let me feel you as emotions blossom and grow."
Your word choice is beautiful! I love it. Nice write!

[Tina Kline]

Be together and not separate when in a relationship. Be one. A very romantic poem.

[ReaperOfPaperlife]

This takes you further then attraction. It defines the love that is inside and weeps itself into another lover's heart. Your words are kind and calming taking a moment to exist in pure beauty, in a way that makes me feel every word your poem speaks.

"Let the delicate touch caress the reluctant soul"

That is a beautiful line, and what made it so beautiful is that you said reluctant. Your words are wise and sweet in such a way they ask kindly for the world to hear them and the world is so enchanted by them they must stop and listen.

Well done.

[Mauricio Montoya]

in this case the world does come together

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautifully written romantic write. Stunning.