Dawn

As the morning light

Kisses the horizon

A new day dances

with brilliant magic

As the vivid display

Changes the velvet 

into a creative ethereal

artwork 

Reviews

[Laurierose]

Truly beautiful interpretation of nature's natural, yet magical process. Beautiful painting of words. Great read.

[Ian Faraway]

Shortest poem I've read but the imagery was just outstanding on this one. Dawn teases us with a new day and all the possibilities than can happen. J'adore! -Ian

[Poetic Beauty]

It is a rather short poem but sometimes it doesn't take a grand amount of words to display and idea well. Glad you liked it.

[fireblossom]

Said so well with few words and lots of mental imagery.

[KAREN]

Beautiful imagery you captured in such a short peace, the reader is able to see in their maind the beautiful picture you have written for us.

Very descriptive and written remarkably. I love your personification in your poems! They are truly wonderful!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I could see the horizon and the gift of nature artwork with your words. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Tina Kline]

A very beautiful poem. You describe the dawn with skill and talent.

[roarke]

and so it does just as poetically. The vivid display changes the velvet is a great line.

[Dark Poetry]

A peaceful poem, nicely done.

[Enigma]

Ah, beautiful and serene. I love the time when the first rays of the sun hit the sky - its a beautiful sight and equally refreshing. Well penned. :)