Begin to Dance

The heart thunders

Once again roaring

To life

After 

An eon of solitude

 

It sparks with fire

And rushes

With a tidal wave

 Of feelings

 

Can you hear

It melodically

Sounding

The syllables

Of your name?

 

Brought to life

After a long

Numbing slumber

Awakening new hope

Of a joyous tomorrow

Filled with laughter

 

Take my hand

And walk with

Me for awhile

Down a new

Path full of

Enlightening adventure

As two hearts begin

To dance.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Octob3r Star]

Beautiful : )

[Lily Mae]

This to me fell soft on my eyes and flowed the same through my heart.. A beautiful piece..xo

[Aidz]

I enjoyed this, although I think the last stanza was one to many, not needed, but thats me

[Sethnicity]

pretty piece... seems more like banter than poetry... the metaphors are sweet like dogwood blooms. success funneling emotion into descriptive words and phrases...

[Tina Kline]

Very beautiful and a bit mysterious, just like love can be. This was a very smooth and silky read making it a pleasure to read from beginning to ending.

[roarke]

This sounds like a sister piece to your "I Think of You" piece.
same smooth flow.

[Enigma]

So beautiful. You have captured the excited feelings of lovers who meet after a long separation. I loved it.

[Wondering Mind]

Lovely!

[Cassie Fraga]

such a sweet write.... holds such simple bliss in it... LOVE IT!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hope poem of love. I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote