Begin to Dance
A Poem by
Poetic Beauty
The heart thunders
Once again roaring
To life
After
An eon of solitude
It sparks with fire
And rushes
With a tidal wave
Of feelings
Can you hear
It melodically
Sounding
The syllables
Of your name?
Brought to life
After a long
Numbing slumber
Awakening new hope
Of a joyous tomorrow
Filled with laughter
Take my hand
And walk with
Me for awhile
Down a new
Path full of
Enlightening adventure
As two hearts begin
To dance.
© 2012 Poetic Beauty
Reviews
It is impressive how you shifted lone mood into a very refreshing and bright one!
I really love the flow from the beginning until the end.
Belle~
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Well written. Nice flow.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Well written. Nice flow.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Beautifully written with awesome flow.....Whisk
Posted 12 Years Ago
Beautifully written with awesome flow.....Whisk
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Love the flow and well the prospect of love is thrilling.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Love the flow and well the prospect of love is thrilling.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
as....watching you behind the glass in the shower...mesmerizing..
Posted 12 Years Ago
as....watching you behind the glass in the shower...mesmerizing..
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Really beautiful, Makes love seem so close and warming to the heart.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Really beautiful, Makes love seem so close and warming to the heart.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Beatiful sensational Poem of love becomes one!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Beatiful sensational Poem of love becomes one!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Beautiful, Poetic...I always get stunned when I read a poem that flow eloquently from one's such as yours...your words danced, and made many readers like myself, make their heart skip a beat. Awesome write.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Beautiful, Poetic...I always get stunned when I read a poem that flow eloquently from one's such as yours...your words danced, and made many readers like myself, make their heart skip a beat. Awesome write.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Heartfelt, loving write. Beautifully penned.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Heartfelt, loving write. Beautifully penned.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Aw, this was such a sweet and sentimental poem! Very beautiful and romantic, great work! :-)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Aw, this was such a sweet and sentimental poem! Very beautiful and romantic, great work! :-)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Poetic Beauty corn country, IL
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First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind.
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