Melt With You

Can you feel

The heart shudder

When the hand is

Placed upon the breast?

 

Do you hear

The delicate

Action

Of the inward

Breath?

 

Can you absorb

The need

To be close

To you?

 

Does the magic

Of emotions

Not yet

Developed

Tap at your

Being?

 

Does your heart

Flutter

As lips part

Tongues meeting?

 

Does the uniqueness

Of scent

Intrigue you

As she melts in your

arms ?

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

YES...YES...a thousand times yes
beautifully written ... wonderful colorful and breathtaking imagery
loved the way you questioned without needing an answer...and left it uncertain whether the answers are yes....or no..
well done PB
I always enjoy reading your poetry....makes me think, you know?
allen

[Octob3r Star]

Very beautiful

[KAREN]

beautiful imagery, with so much tasteful romance and love written into one beautiful love poem.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

One can feel the love, and passion in this well penned piece!

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and powerful description of desire and emotion. The touch then smell of a lover become a permanent part of our memory. I like the complete poem. I like the question at the end of the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tina Kline]

Very steamy and romantic. Great imagery, has a powerful impact.

[roarke]

ummm, could be. lol.

heady question all, now, find the answers for the second half of the rush.
Good write.

[Enigma]

Superb poetry. So sensuous and appealing. Great work.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Emotional, seductive write. Wonderfully expressed. Nicely done.

[Cassie Fraga]

mmmm.... steamy and desire speaks loud in question... very nice mix sistah!!
never a let down reading your stuff!! thank you for sharing!!

[Lily Mae]

"Do you hear
The delicate
Action
Of the inward
Breath?"

I love it as a whole but this part just made me sigh... I love it...xo