Lullabye

Let me sing you a lullabye

one that ease your troubles

and make you sigh

one in which the

world will fall away

as the dream state 

begins to play

Drift with me 

upon satin clouds

Where love 

is said out loud

Gaze with me 

upon the stars 

tonight

Lets journey

on a soul 

bound flight

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

This has an awesome lyrical quality to it. One of my favorites from you for its simplicity yet it makes me want to read through it several times and plays in my head. It could be done as spoken word. I have a few that I want to record that way to post myself.

[Jeremy Baker]

I could fall asleep with these words in my ears; it's so peaceful. Lovely writing!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

So peaceful, left me in a dreamy state of mind!

[KAREN]

beautiful, and has a peaceful feel to it.

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Such a dreamy, whimsical poem. It flows perfectly as a lullaby. Beautiful!

[Priscilla Sayers]

beautifully written as it reads like a smooth lullaby, dreamy... I love it!

With a few words yet so miraculously written, perfect, and to the point.

My favorite line:
" Drift with me upon satin clouds where love is said out loud "

Great work!

[ChervenkovaM]

Wow, this is wonderful! So relaxing and fascinating :)))

[Tina Kline]

Peaceful and tranquil. Wonderful song and it would be a most wonderful flight. I really enjoyed this poem.

[WiLL i e]

Ah yes, sing away. Sing away....alot of peace in this piece. I like that very much

[Michael X]

Flight of illusion, where dreams travel, and the veil is so thin, and sometimes desire gets the best of us, then our words take us to the skies. Swift and flowing yet meditative, the balance of a fine illusion :)