Entered Your City?

If I graffitied your name

On the Brooklyn bridge

Surrounded by hearts

And roses

Would you know

It was me

Trying to gain

Your undivided attention?

 

If I spray painted

A poem with

Gothic flare

And crimson desire

Would you know

It was I

Who wrote

Such a vivid

Tell all display?

 

If I flew out there

And tattooed

Your words on my

Thigh

Would you know

I had even

Entered your city?

 

 

Reviews

[Enigma]

Intriguing. Attempts at gaining someone's attention, lurking at the corners of that person's consciousness. Beautifully vivid. Keep it up.

[Aidz]

I like this, actually made me smile as its was just balanced right :)

[Jibey]

A lovely sequence of thoughts with the repeated construction and question holding the poem together nicely. We have dreams without knowing how wel they are shared. 'crimson desire'.... yes, it happens

[Andrea]

this is gorgeous. the imagery is stunning. simply love it.