Entered Your City?

If I graffitied your name

On the Brooklyn bridge

Surrounded by hearts

And roses

Would you know

It was me

Trying to gain

Your undivided attention?

 

If I spray painted

A poem with

Gothic flare

And crimson desire

Would you know

It was I

Who wrote

Such a vivid

Tell all display?

 

If I flew out there

And tattooed

Your words on my

Thigh

Would you know

I had even

Entered your city?

 

 

Reviews

[Lorna]

amazing concept, I absolutely adore this.
"If I spray painted

A poem with

Gothic flare

And crimson desire

Would you know

It was I

Who wrote

Such a vivid

Tell all display?"

That especially, left me speechless.

[Gomer LePoet]

Gosh I sure would hope so! but a heads-up wouldn't hurt lol. good thoughts here

[Octob3r Star]

I love writes about New York. Thanks for the memories. Cheers :)

[Tina Kline]

Romantic yet filled with painful uncertainty. Excellent poem.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A piercing concept, well done.

[Sweet Emotions]

I love the idea of writing the words in such obvious, yet hidden, places.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Very interesting concept! I like the questions; they give room for thought.

[Larry Dyson]

rhetorical question...but realistically if it were you?...yes I would know

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Sometimes we wonder what it would take and does it even matter. Brilliant write.

[Liza]

The word city paints a mental image of crowds moving seemingly fast - getting no where - the emotions seem painted and felt this way too - interesting and unexpected twist - thank you for that.