Deeper Still

My breast are full and large

For you touch they long

But deeper still my heart

Throbs to feel your song

 

My eager lips part

Licking delicately

But deeper still

They whisper

Your name silently

 

Eyes sparkle with fire

Scanning you with ease

But deeper still

My soul shines

Your name it breathes

  

Listen carefully

For those wispy words

That glide across the ether

Softly spoken in the night

The words I love you

Take a east bound flight

 

Reviews

Such a beautiful ode to the one you try to reach, and I feel the longing, the lost and pain. These stanza's are full with hope, and colorful meaning. Each new one, brings your spirit closer to that one. I really enjoyed this write.
It has an elusiveness I adore.

E.L.

[akilahquinn]

I love how this paints a picture in the mind.

[DarkLovingRaven]

This is a fantastic poem you have here! It's full of romance intertwined with passion. The poem's format is captivating! It definitely get's you going a bit. Great job! Keep up the good work!

[Grace Catherine C.]

Hm, it's a nice little poem.

[The Analog Kid]

I get it:) Very nicely done. The repetition works well. You fooled me...this is very tender.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

The color sets this poem beautifully! This was stunning in imagery as well as feelings! Awesome work!

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Deeper still...what a great title and concept. This was a very passionate, beautiful poem. Awesome job.

[Aidz]

Likin the 3rd Stanza drawn nicely

[Cassie Fraga]

Passion!!! such a story to tell... this was very creative in flow... LOVED IT!!

[Tina Kline]

Very romantic and passionate. Thrilling too. This is one excellent write!!! Love it!!

[Eagle Cruagh]

A poem needs many facets to be
thoroughly interesting and exciting.
Most of us know the positives, but
we become impassioned and leave
many facets in the dust.
This poem is exquisite. It has every
little item of interest and delight
that is known to mankind.

If you were taking orders for more
of this kind of writing, I would ask for
at least a dozen.

Absolutely unique and refreshing

---- John