Deeper Still

My breast are full and large

For you touch they long

But deeper still my heart

Throbs to feel your song

 

My eager lips part

Licking delicately

But deeper still

They whisper

Your name silently

 

Eyes sparkle with fire

Scanning you with ease

But deeper still

My soul shines

Your name it breathes

  

Listen carefully

For those wispy words

That glide across the ether

Softly spoken in the night

The words I love you

Take a east bound flight

 

Reviews

Such a beautiful ode to the one you try to reach, and I feel the longing, the lost and pain. These stanza's are full with hope, and colorful meaning. Each new one, brings your spirit closer to that one. I really enjoyed this write.
It has an elusiveness I adore.

E.L.

[Christina]

Lovely poem, sensual yet very tastefully done. Well penned, thank you for sharing!

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This is full of passion and enduring love :) Very lovely!

[LonelySoul]

hmmm...I may need a smoke after reading this one...
whew,it's gettibg a bit warm in here...

[KAREN]

This poem has a sweet gentle touch to it. It is written with feeling, and has romance in it, but done with taste.

[Brianna Brie]

This is delicate. I not only see the erotic passion, but deeper still the soul that breathes the words "I love you". Wonderous poem...

[Enigma]

Beautiful. The passion is intense and yet, subtle. I like it.

[Jeremy Baker]

The eroticism is softly revealed and gently explored here. Very nice. Minor typos - you left off the 's' in 'breasts' in the first line, 'r' in 'your' in the second line, and 'n' in 'an' in the final line. These don't detract at all from what is otherwise a tender and soft narrative. Liked it!

[Poetic Beauty]

Many of my pieces are written about the same person. Has been on going over ayear I embrace the love I feel but don't give into the notion that it will ever be

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

This actually incites the erotic response of the reader that are used to them, well done, good read.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Without desire it is hard to love..Without loving fully it is hard to stay in love
You wrote the best of both ..

Chloe