Ambrosial Sunlight

creative poetry

Let the sunlight

Romance your soul

With aqueous fulfillment

And reviving passion

That warms as it grows

 

Let the rays

Sprinkle you with

Shimmering amethyst glitter

In the morning light

Not romantic pleasure

But one of imaginations

Delight

 

Let the heat

Blush the once

Cool pale skin

Cascading upon you

With renewal

As vivid colors blend

 

Let the sun

Shine on places

That no one can see

Ambrosial delight

And delectable tenacity

Let the world

Fall away

In the rufescent afterglow

As hope’s melody

Sings with vigor

In the afternoon light

Creativity preternatural

Spellbinding flight

 

Let the revival

Melt stone all day

And encompass

Your being

With serous desire

 

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

What a charming poem! Six charms to be exact, and well ordered as the first three are fundamental and universal while the last three are closer to home and personal. Yet the key is "Let the sun Shine on places That no one can see" such that we may delight in such discovery. And that notion is ambrosia for the mind. Thanks, and may the light of reviews shine on you Poetic Beauty.

[ThomasHinyard]

Let me feel the ambrosia. :-)
I love your use of vocabulary here. It's magnificent and enlightening.

^_^

[Sweets]

So romantic and beautiful :)

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Goodness, this poem had me with "Let the sunlight romance your soul"! The language you used here is as lovely as sunlight itself.

This is a very beautiful poem, I love it! Awesome work!

[Jibey]

Beautifully crafted... the repeated structure of each first line introducing new thoughts of the sun's warm stirring, reviving the soul, bringing delight, energising and satisfying... I was struck by the though of shining 'on places that noone can see'... suggesting an intimacy that encompasses the being 'with serious desire'... a creative outpouring

[FireFly]

Such a beautiful piece! Even the color of the font enhanced the writing...well done!

[Dream Weaver]

Nice title...a real eye catcher, as for the write; beautifully done!
You've come a long way since I last read you...

[Cassie Fraga]

Captivating is the perfect word for this write!! such a beautiful piece indeed, such a warm and easy feel to it!! GREAT WORK!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Really beautiful... the romantic metaphors are very captivating.

[LonelySoul]

like watching a womans curves as firelight reflects her desire through her slow dance...each move is another meaning,another fantasy,as free as the ambers flowing into a sunset sky...another nice write

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love the theme and how you carried the metaphors throughout the poem..gives a warm glow to your work.