Ambrosial Sunlight

creative poetry

Let the sunlight

Romance your soul

With aqueous fulfillment

And reviving passion

That warms as it grows

 

Let the rays

Sprinkle you with

Shimmering amethyst glitter

In the morning light

Not romantic pleasure

But one of imaginations

Delight

 

Let the heat

Blush the once

Cool pale skin

Cascading upon you

With renewal

As vivid colors blend

 

Let the sun

Shine on places

That no one can see

Ambrosial delight

And delectable tenacity

Let the world

Fall away

In the rufescent afterglow

As hope’s melody

Sings with vigor

In the afternoon light

Creativity preternatural

Spellbinding flight

 

Let the revival

Melt stone all day

And encompass

Your being

With serous desire

 

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

What a charming poem! Six charms to be exact, and well ordered as the first three are fundamental and universal while the last three are closer to home and personal. Yet the key is "Let the sun Shine on places That no one can see" such that we may delight in such discovery. And that notion is ambrosia for the mind. Thanks, and may the light of reviews shine on you Poetic Beauty.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Captivating word play with beautiful images. Nicely done.

[Poetic Beauty]

thank you

[Ian Faraway]

If only I had half of the skill as you as a Poet... the ability to write about something simple and make it seem almost...desireable. Something that the heart wants but has a chance to feel every day. J'adore.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for the compliment. I am always trying new topics and word choices.

[Nobody.]

lovely. romantic.
the words dance with their meanings.
the sentiments warm the soul.

mmm mmm good!

RG

[Jeremy Baker]

Agree with Jibey, a lovely write and one that was simply a pleasure to read!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the journey that this poem swept me away in! Beautifully crafted!

[KAREN]

This poem is nicely written, and filled with warmth and love.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

Your vocabulary is so spell-like I dare say it's witchlike in its grandeur and opacity. Sweetheart do you even know how much beauty you paint?

[Reaper]

beautiful. all you can really say about this.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. A sunny day can bring hope to most people. I like the desire in the words and the hope create by the excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote