Gemstone Passion

Gemstone Passion

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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for creative poetry but this actually has a deep emotional meaning.

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Unyielding in strength

It washes over

Over the soul

With an intensity

Unreleanting

 

Heart gravitating

In a long distance

Direction of abnormal

Proportions

 

Enchanting the mind

With saccharine desire

And superstitious

Commitment

 

As feathery feelings

Warm the heart

That beats with aspiration

Of a love not yet known

Unconditionally

 

The divine nebulous

Spell binding magic

Magnetically pulls

At heartstrings

Of silver and sapphire

That glow.

 

Ruby passion dances

Upon the midnight velvet

As red Berly emerald love

Gleams with rare devotion

With amber fusions

Of an embrace

Not yet known


Where star sapphire

gleams upon

the rainbow moonstone

of sometimes the impossible

isn’t out of our sunstones reach

© 2012 Poetic Beauty


Author's Note

Poetic Beauty
The gems used in this poem are real and many of them are very rare which is why I chose them.

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I like the photo and the words. I wander as a free-climber on hills and mountains. I suicide both the US oceans. I found beautiful artwork. A wise person look for beauty in all things. I found beauty in your amazing words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I can definitely see the imagery and like the poem overall HOWEVER I feel like some of the placements of the gemstones were kind of forced. Other than that, loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very beautiful, romantic and creative.

Posted 12 Years Ago


ah but to notice the rare gems, as stones dug from the earth, imbued with spiritual energies and poetic focus.
There are other rare gems, that aren't bezeled into rings or necklaces. Multifaceted entities that aren't held up in ritual ceremony or private prayer.
These rarer still colors of the procession.
Artists, creators all.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bright, colourful and an engaging write. Well penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh yes very lovely... the use of the gemstones in describing feelings was wonderful... you injected them perfectly. My favorite verse...

The divine nebulous
Spell binding magic
Magnetically pulls
At heartstrings
Of silver and sapphire
That glow.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind. Secondly be kind to each .. more..

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