Fabian Victory

creative poetry words: sadleria, saffron, salivary, sedate, fabian, fabulate, feathery, fantasy, fantigue

Eyes closed underneath

A vivid saffron sky

Sadleria  sway

In the sedated afternoon

As parrots take

Unexpected feathery flight

 

Fabulated emotion

Of calm drifts

Upon the tropical breeze

Swirling with jasmine

Surrendering to ease

 

Salivating passion

Perspires with

Droplets of flushed

Sanguine fever

In an environment

Where fantasy

Is allowed to soar

 

Mind no longer

In a state of fantigue

A Fabian victory

Over a state of anxiety

Reviews

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

The title of this poem attracted me...what a beautiful piece. I love the words you chose and how you put them together. Very interesting!

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nice..very nice..what a beautiful flow..you have perfected the art of taking random words and making someone special.

[Lily Mae]

This draws you in and then you don't want to leave.. Wonderfully penned :) xx

[Tina Kline]

Wow, this is truly beautiful...it has a wonderful sense of peace about it. This is creative writing at its finest!

[WhiteWillow]

You used those challenging words effortlessly, such a beautiful, lyrical piece!

[LadyCardiac]

I can close my eyes and feel the mist of the water gently landing on my face as it whispers trhough the wind. Truly a beautiful picture of serenity

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Nothing wrong with a little break from reality... you really painted a picture of paradise.

[Cassie Fraga]

WOW!! U make me wanna jump into ur writing and never leave!! hahahaha!! u pen so beautifully sis... another piece for my fav. pile!! thank you for sharing!!