Ectomorphic Atmosphere

Creative Poetry group words enthusiastic, slimsy, ectomorphic, pallid, relevant

The ectomorphic atmosphere 

Left a pallid taste 

in her ambitious 

mouth

Pallid desires

Left slimsy direction

In a catatonic world

of enthusiastic void

Where relevant 

Yearnings 

Erupt with

Volcanic lava

Crimson turned to 

gray ash

Churning passion

Washes away

A plastic aftertaste

Drizzling life

With scarlet 

Melodies

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

aaaawwww.... the aftermath... yes very strong in message and I love the way you express it so beautifully!!

[limbalring]

The heaviness of the afterward.

Richness of color giving way to pallor.

Great expression of contrast.
Awesome piece.

[Jeremy Baker]

The victory of passion over the mundane! A nice, stylish write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Life teaches us many things. We can erupt into pleasure or pain. Some melodies leave us wishing for better places and ending. I enjoyed this poem. Strong statement opening the doors to thoughts and vision. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote