Ectomorphic Atmosphere

Creative Poetry group words enthusiastic, slimsy, ectomorphic, pallid, relevant

The ectomorphic atmosphere 

Left a pallid taste 

in her ambitious 

mouth

Pallid desires

Left slimsy direction

In a catatonic world

of enthusiastic void

Where relevant 

Yearnings 

Erupt with

Volcanic lava

Crimson turned to 

gray ash

Churning passion

Washes away

A plastic aftertaste

Drizzling life

With scarlet 

Melodies

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A swirling mass of perfectly rendeered words, a most talented rising of pieced framed, well done, good read.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Clever use of words, brilliant masterpiece!

[Lily Mae]

Love it love it... but that last stanza is perfect.. I love the way you expressed those closing thoughts...xo

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You used your words to express a very strong poem! Excellent talent used here.

[KAREN]

Excellent write, nice flow. Love the first and last stanza.

[Mi Wae]

I love the repeating sounds and I feel the distaste of your subject. lovely.

[Aidz]

Kewl use of the words... I woulda come up with Slimer form goshtbusters lol ;)

[Tina Kline]

This is great writing, very creative use of the listed words.

[WhiteWillow]

I love the way everyone can spin a different tale using the same words. An amazing write, beautifully done.

[roarke]

hard words to fashion.... what to do, where to go, .. challenging. You stepped up in fine form.
The first stanza sets a strong picture, the best of the quartet.