Secret Whispers

Listen carefully

Whispers drift across

The distance

Upon the wings

Of the nocturnal

Hour

 

Softly calling out

Breathy sounds

Dancing on the wind

Searching

For the one person

Who will hear

Them

Who will understand

Them

 

Secrets

Locked deep inside

Come pouring out

In the velvet onyx

Wrapped in satin

With feathery

Touches of light

Longing to be

Heard

 

In the quiet

Moments

They speak their

Truth

Caressing the ears

Lightly

With honesty

Softly

 

Apprehension

Keeps the words

Locked

Deep within

Away from the

 Bright sun rays

Waiting until

Dreamscapes start

To call out

Their love

Quietly.

Reviews

[Jibey]

I like the short lines and the intensity of the feelings they carry... the gentle and passionate thoughts restrained by the breeze and the kiss of nature across the vastness of the universe... a lovey dreamscape

[Emily Rae]

the imagery that you've created in this piece is profound. as I read it, it literally whispered to me. great write.

[Cassie Fraga]

ooooh ... u just painted a lovely picture with words!! BRAVO!!! I love the emotion of this... great read!! thank you for sharing!!!

[Eagle Cruagh]

In the dusk dreamscapes start
to call out their love
Quietly.
Wish I could write something like this.
'Beautiful.
---- Eagle Cruagh

[roarke]

This is like a painted autumn leaf turning in the seasonal breeze. Soft, quiet, beautiful. Nice piece.

[Larry Dyson]

you painted some beautiful metaphors here.. I like it..a depth I appreciate..

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the gentle feel and the desire in the words. Felt like gentle whisper of hope and need we need to hear. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote