Secret Whispers

Listen carefully

Whispers drift across

The distance

Upon the wings

Of the nocturnal

Hour

 

Softly calling out

Breathy sounds

Dancing on the wind

Searching

For the one person

Who will hear

Them

Who will understand

Them

 

Secrets

Locked deep inside

Come pouring out

In the velvet onyx

Wrapped in satin

With feathery

Touches of light

Longing to be

Heard

 

In the quiet

Moments

They speak their

Truth

Caressing the ears

Lightly

With honesty

Softly

 

Apprehension

Keeps the words

Locked

Deep within

Away from the

 Bright sun rays

Waiting until

Dreamscapes start

To call out

Their love

Quietly.

Reviews

[Jacob Mann]

I picture an animation of this. Perhaps kinetic typography or silhouette style. Anyhoo... I like the overall theme and style of this piece. Well done.

[Tina Kline]

Wow! This is extraordinary. Fabulous job on this, I love it and greatly enjoyed reading it!

[No name]

A beautiful write! thanks so much for sharing!!!

[etxcp]

I like it!!!!!!! Its a beautiful piece!!!!!!!!! So insprational! Wonderful!!!!! Write more!!!!!

[Senseless whatever]

Beautiful write. Even flow and feel. The read itself comes across almost as a whisper holding back so much.

[Tommy]

This is truly a beautiful piece here. The word play flows so nice and the imagery is soothing and fitting for the tone. Sometimes it is within our dreams where we feel the safest. But if we never wake to tell our truths, we'll never know if love is true...

Another awesome write!!!
RLG,
Tommy

A beautiful balance of wisdom within these secret whispers... Lovely poem!

[The They]

This poem is fantastic, it might even be one of my favorites of yours. I love how the wind becomes a whisperer that travels everywhere and imparts secrets on those willing to listen in their own silence. The fast and rhythmic pace (which is indicated by line breaks to me) made me feel as if i was rushing through the night sky. Keep it up! Good write!

[Lily Mae]

"Caressing the ears lightly with honesty..." I love this for many reasons..xx

[Thea]

Wow...A really beautiful poem...Words are well-used in every line...Great work!
:)))