Secret Whispers

Listen carefully

Whispers drift across

The distance

Upon the wings

Of the nocturnal

Hour

 

Softly calling out

Breathy sounds

Dancing on the wind

Searching

For the one person

Who will hear

Them

Who will understand

Them

 

Secrets

Locked deep inside

Come pouring out

In the velvet onyx

Wrapped in satin

With feathery

Touches of light

Longing to be

Heard

 

In the quiet

Moments

They speak their

Truth

Caressing the ears

Lightly

With honesty

Softly

 

Apprehension

Keeps the words

Locked

Deep within

Away from the

 Bright sun rays

Waiting until

Dreamscapes start

To call out

Their love

Quietly.

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Sensual imagery and peaceful nature of this write is amazing. Brilliant write. Nicely done. A fave.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Love how it comes together and I know I say this alot but it’s a combination of things that catches my eye when I say this. You have a unique style and I see that in all your work.
Excellent write.

[LonelySoul]

I love the imagry the picture you paint with words,makes me feel as if I'm right beside you,hearing your thoughts,your breath on my ear...nice work !

[Michael X]

your work reminds me alot of dreamscapes and the fashion of such design, the realm of imagination and poetry touch where such meanings come to life,
the form is a cascade from start to finish, your words, alive in mysterious bloom.

[A]

Terrific flow of words, it has a wonderful sense of imagery, it's like one must use all his senses in order to live the moment you conveyed so beautifully.
This is a truly great piece of writing.
Thank you for sharing.

[WhiteWillow]

Secrets and dreams are meant to be shared with only a select few. And sometimes, they're better left inside, to be cherished and relived solely by their owner. Lyrical, and simply beautiful

[Gomer LePoet]

Excellent piece of flowing poetry to the ears and eyes. I like breathy sounds !!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was beautifully written with calm peaceful affects! Found myselflistening as I read, waiting to hear the words I love you! Love your work!!

[KAREN]

I find this to be so calming and peaceful. The ending has great lines.
Deep with
Away from the
Bright sun rays
Waiting until
Dreamscapes start
To call out
Their love
Quietly.

[Aidz]

Nice flow and symmetry to this write nicely done