No More Tears

Cupid’s arrow hit

A little too hard

Striking an artery

Leaving it to bleed

With total disregard

 

Three years of chasing

Shadows of yesterday

Desolate tears

Seething in the wounds

Of a moment past

 

Immersed in fluid

Of a grieving heart

The pulse shattered

Splitting apart

 

The shards scatter

Upon the midnight

wind

As regeneration

Slowly begins

 

Copasetic notes

Gather upon the ears

Sweet melodies sing

No More Tears

 

 

 

Reviews

[AmandaN]

Cleverly written with great imagery,I really feel this. Excellent stuff

[A]

A heart felt ache within your words... some things would have the ability to hurt us for a very long time, but not forever, time is the best healer yet it leaves a scar.
you convey powerful feelings in this poem, you are truly talented.
Thank you for sharing

[Emily Rae]

with this, you expose us to the pains of love's insult and injury, and then you offer a sense of recovery and hope.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A scar may remain but the pain will always go away for healing is as natural as breathing. A wonderfully melancholy poem.

[Allmax]

Your Skills are pure talent seeping into your words. As I read your poem I was filled with the thought of past relationships and perhaps getting over past loves, however it did seem to strike a pose for me with the flow, which was very smooth. It has been awhile since I have tried to write a review, but with this one you made my job easy...Thank you for sharing.

[roarke]

Rebirth, new vision, the midnight winds has a way of clearing the path. A solid write, with positive undertones of moving forward. It's good to read strong poetry like this, you can't mistake the direction or intensions. Well done.