No More Tears

No More Tears

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Cupid’s arrow hit

A little too hard

Striking an artery

Leaving it to bleed

With total disregard

 

Three years of chasing

Shadows of yesterday

Desolate tears

Seething in the wounds

Of a moment past

 

Immersed in fluid

Of a grieving heart

The pulse shattered

Splitting apart

 

The shards scatter

Upon the midnight

wind

As regeneration

Slowly begins

 

Copasetic notes

Gather upon the ears

Sweet melodies sing

No More Tears

 

 

 

© 2012 Poetic Beauty


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Cleverly written with great imagery,I really feel this. Excellent stuff

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A heart felt ache within your words... some things would have the ability to hurt us for a very long time, but not forever, time is the best healer yet it leaves a scar.
you convey powerful feelings in this poem, you are truly talented.
Thank you for sharing

Posted 13 Years Ago


with this, you expose us to the pains of love's insult and injury, and then you offer a sense of recovery and hope.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A scar may remain but the pain will always go away for healing is as natural as breathing. A wonderfully melancholy poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Your Skills are pure talent seeping into your words. As I read your poem I was filled with the thought of past relationships and perhaps getting over past loves, however it did seem to strike a pose for me with the flow, which was very smooth. It has been awhile since I have tried to write a review, but with this one you made my job easy...Thank you for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Rebirth, new vision, the midnight winds has a way of clearing the path. A solid write, with positive undertones of moving forward. It's good to read strong poetry like this, you can't mistake the direction or intensions. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind. Secondly be kind to each .. more..

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