Sunlight Dream

One of my favorite dreams

Close your eyes

And feel the sunlight

On your face

As the rays warm

And two minds interlace

 

Two people

Sit side by side

With no place

To go

Just a moment in time

Where hearts melt

And everything else

Vanishes

In the sunlight’s glow

 

Her head

Lay on his shoulder

Relaxed

Feeling complete

Her cheek

Brushes softly

On his bright

Yellow shirt

 

 

He stares

At her contently

As words

Flutter upon

The warm midday air

 

Beers sipped slowly

As a connection is found

Two separate being

Become mentally

Bound.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Magdelena]

Ohhhhh, yes.. Now this made me sigh.. Fab Imagery!! I felt myself holding my breath for nothing more greater than connection.. Loved the way you brought this forth too. Slow like, simple, and softly... The right touch to make one go 'ahhhhhh'


Huggers

Mags xx

[Leslie Philibert]

What I really enjoyed is the last verse,the way you combine a normal situation like beer drinking with very spiritual thoughts.Good work.

[Thea]

Wow...Very beautiful imagery...Love was strongly shown here...Well done!
:)))

[Jibey]

Pleasing, a dreamy vision of hope and anticipation..

[KAREN]

Beautifully written! Warmth and love between two people are captured so well in this piece!

[Ms.Bri]

..Moments like this are very rare. You captured me with your words. well written. Very beautiful keep writing so I could keep reading.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a beautiful moment of sweet surrender nicely portrayed through your words.

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice place you took me with your words. Sometime good to find someone to be with. A friend with the same desire and life had slowed down to enjoy a beer and some good conversation. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Lily Mae]

This is just fine... it let me get lost in that sunlights glow.. :) I love moments like this.. and for me they don't happen often enough so it's beautiful to be reminded..xo

[roarke]

There's a smooth linear line here, compact time frame, in the here and now, letting the universe rest, and still holds quiet intensity. good selection of observations.

[Kim's Poems]

Wonderful imagery and detail.
I enjoyed this write,
Thought it was beuatiful.