Sunlight Dream

One of my favorite dreams

Close your eyes

And feel the sunlight

On your face

As the rays warm

And two minds interlace

 

Two people

Sit side by side

With no place

To go

Just a moment in time

Where hearts melt

And everything else

Vanishes

In the sunlight’s glow

 

Her head

Lay on his shoulder

Relaxed

Feeling complete

Her cheek

Brushes softly

On his bright

Yellow shirt

 

 

He stares

At her contently

As words

Flutter upon

The warm midday air

 

Beers sipped slowly

As a connection is found

Two separate being

Become mentally

Bound.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Magdelena]

Ohhhhh, yes.. Now this made me sigh.. Fab Imagery!! I felt myself holding my breath for nothing more greater than connection.. Loved the way you brought this forth too. Slow like, simple, and softly... The right touch to make one go 'ahhhhhh'


Huggers

Mags xx

[tynamite]

This one makes me think of the summer, but with nicer imagery.

[Poetic Beauty]

This was written from a dream I had.

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work!

[Bare trees]

Such a nice thought the mind can picture perfectly. I can feel and smell her hair on the side of my face now. There's nothing like being in tune with someone you love in the type of setting you've described so clearly. Wonderful poem.

[Tina Kline]

Very tender and romantic. A most wonderful dream.

[Reaper]

nice job

[Time.]

I love this, it had it's on tone... It just didn't seem right when I read through it but when I read through slower it made perfect sense! Amazing.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I love this slow pace poem that brings two people together as one! Beautiful

[Emily Rae]

you captured intimacy in this piece. i felt relaxed and at peace when I read it, nice job!

[Aidz]

I like the way you sliped in beer...interesting ;)