Dreamscapes and Reality

warm wishes and tender moments

Beyond the reach of reality

Lies a realm that shimmers

With delight

Waiting quietly

for the dreamscapes to begin

 

Where hands are held

While conversation

Float upon vanilla cappuccino clouds

That taste of simmering  decadent passion

And raspberry friendship

 

Laughter soars

Calling to the broken soul

Mending the once broken heart

With Irish Cream melodies

And chocolate chips scones

 

Destroying sour notations

Of past faults and mistakes

So take this hand

and journey with me

underneath the velvet sky

as whispers consoles

those lonely nights

Come fly with me

Under the milky way

As I hold you tight.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

"While conversation
Float upon vanilla cappuccino clouds
That taste of simmering decadent passion
And raspberry friendship"

talk about a morning poem. This was like sitting on a f*****g pillow meditating in space. 5 months and your chops are way the f**k up. This is smooth jazz.

This f*****g thing is chock full of heavy quotables. The ongoing metaphor of breakfast, new beginnings and great heighst is dripping from it like drool on a first date.

This is that intro love its its purest form. My favorite one from you. So this means your full of shitw hen you said your muse took a vacation. This thing is power...so nonsense of you. I CALL SHENANEGANS!

[Poetic Beauty]

I am always up to shenanigans. This piece is still one of my all time favorites and thanks for saying it is like smooth jazz. That is one of the best compliments I have received from you or anyone else.

[LadyCardiac]

Nice...very smooth.

[Tina Kline]

This has a real positive feel, tender and comforting. I love the images you use, over all, just a real outstanding poem!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

We must endure the sour moment of life in order to appreciate the sweet ones... this was quite wondrous and soothing.

[Lily Mae]

I totally have missed reading you.. I'm smiling as I read this because ...yes it is full of poetic beauty and then more.. I don't know if I'm hungry now or just want a date really bad with food involved.. ;) You have tapped into the "sugar" of life..x excellent as always.. xo

[NightsShade]

First off, I'd like to apologize... I haven't reviewed anything in a long time...

Anyways! For some reason I couldn't help but channel the Wizard of Oz while reading your piece. You defiantly achieved a consistent dreamlike and sweet tone throughout each stanza. Great word choice and messages as well. I mean, who doesn't wish for a place where faults and mistakes are forgotten? In my opinion, I feel as if... this was a poem about second chances; as if someone had moved to a city where there were no preconceived notions and a great future to be realized.

[KAREN]

Love the flow and imagery.
Laughter soars
Calling to the broken soul
Mending the once broken heart
With irish cream melodies
And chocolate chip scones
Beautiful!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was smooth and had an excellent feel to it! Picture perfect wording of friendship and being together!

[roarke]

So this is what they feed NASA astronaut's before going into space?

A lovely prelude to exploring raspberry friendships.

[Aidz]

I liked the feel of this and the coffee references.... Coloured nicely in silver pastels of various hues :)