Dreamscapes and Reality

warm wishes and tender moments

Beyond the reach of reality

Lies a realm that shimmers

With delight

Waiting quietly

for the dreamscapes to begin

 

Where hands are held

While conversation

Float upon vanilla cappuccino clouds

That taste of simmering  decadent passion

And raspberry friendship

 

Laughter soars

Calling to the broken soul

Mending the once broken heart

With Irish Cream melodies

And chocolate chips scones

 

Destroying sour notations

Of past faults and mistakes

So take this hand

and journey with me

underneath the velvet sky

as whispers consoles

those lonely nights

Come fly with me

Under the milky way

As I hold you tight.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

"While conversation
Float upon vanilla cappuccino clouds
That taste of simmering decadent passion
And raspberry friendship"

talk about a morning poem. This was like sitting on a f*****g pillow meditating in space. 5 months and your chops are way the f**k up. This is smooth jazz.

This f*****g thing is chock full of heavy quotables. The ongoing metaphor of breakfast, new beginnings and great heighst is dripping from it like drool on a first date.

This is that intro love its its purest form. My favorite one from you. So this means your full of shitw hen you said your muse took a vacation. This thing is power...so nonsense of you. I CALL SHENANEGANS!

[Poetic Beauty]

I am always up to shenanigans. This piece is still one of my all time favorites and thanks for saying it is like smooth jazz. That is one of the best compliments I have received from you or anyone else.

[Satire69]

Very dreamy

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

I love this. It's sooo... happy :) Makes me feels all warm inside :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thanks this is one of my all time favorites

[InkLust]

Sweet and full of tender warmth. Lovely!

[Jibey]

So very romantic... an invitation not to be refused... softly alluring, promising gentle pleasures and warm consolation

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice journey in your words. I like the gentle pace of the poem and the happy ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Phear]

very well done, i particularly love the wording! excellent job hope to read more soon :)

[sonyaroo]

You have an amazing grasp of the English language. The wording is delicious and dreamy, but still has an underlying tension to it. Brilliant!

[Brianna Brie]

This is absolutely precious. It makes me feel a heaviness simply because of the truth to it. The light hearted playfulness softens the blow. Lovely play on words.

[Raven Starhawk]

The fabric of this poem wraps around me. I am enchanted by the words that seemingly pour so easily from your pen. Great poem.

[MJ]

Raspberry Friendships and Cappuccino Clouds! It was like I was floating through a dream. So bittersweet it is. Amazing!