Christmas journey of the heart
A Poem by
Poetic Beauty
I was thinking of someone today and this came to mind...and no it isn't Frog
Hold my hand
And walk with me
Through this wintery
Wonderland
That glitters
With the magic
That fills
The earth with love
As snow flakes
Float down from above
Embrace the spark
Of merriment
While the time is right
Gather with me on
This whimsical night
See the white powder
Gather on the street
As the lampposts
Lights the way
And shoe prints
Gather under our feet
Feel the warmth
That fills the soul
As your scent
Surrounds
When the wind
Begins to blow
Hypnotize me
Envelope the moment
With laughter
As the heart begins
To sing
Christmas romance
Twinkles
as the lights dance
on this amazing eve
Making the heart
Feel pleased
Astound me
with the heat
of your heart
as the world transforms
into new awakening
a glorious journey
in which to embark
© 2011 Poetic Beauty
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very unique rhyme scheme, there was no identifiable pattern, yet it flowed so smoothly it slipped off my tongue like silk. one thing though, the red lettering might be better if it was blue, or green (winter colors) but this was a flawless piece,
thank you for sharing.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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A charming heart-warmer... romantic, dreamy
Posted 13 Years Ago
A charming heart-warmer... romantic, dreamy
Beautiful poetry...I loved it
Posted 13 Years Ago
Beautiful poetry...I loved it
Feels like snow here supposed to be summer, lol... enjoyed the read :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Feels like snow here supposed to be summer, lol... enjoyed the read :)
very unique rhyme scheme, there was no identifiable pattern, yet it flowed so smoothly it slipped off my tongue like silk. one thing though, the red lettering might be better if it was blue, or green (winter colors) but this was a flawless piece,
thank you for sharing.
Posted 13 Years Ago
very unique rhyme scheme, there was no identifiable pattern, yet it flowed so smoothly it slipped off my tongue like silk. one thing though, the red lettering might be better if it was blue, or green (winter colors) but this was a flawless piece,
thank you for sharing.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Excellent imagery filled with romance and love! Stunning work!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Excellent imagery filled with romance and love! Stunning work!
Love it! Full of love and romance, nice flow and I felt every emotion. Excellent!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Love it! Full of love and romance, nice flow and I felt every emotion. Excellent!
The magic that fills the earth with love as snow flakes.......what a glorious piece.
Posted 13 Years Ago
The magic that fills the earth with love as snow flakes.......what a glorious piece.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
that kind of loving melts snow!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
that kind of loving melts snow!!
cool vision of the snow and a park ..much like the park in Denver Colo.. I saw it just this way a long time ago..
Posted 13 Years Ago
cool vision of the snow and a park ..much like the park in Denver Colo.. I saw it just this way a long time ago..
And this my dear is perfection.. you have captured every single emotion that could be felt during this time..xo
Posted 13 Years Ago
And this my dear is perfection.. you have captured every single emotion that could be felt during this time..xo
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Poetic Beauty corn country, IL
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First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind.
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